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I am the child of change, adopted by many.
From the intense fusion of hope and desire, I was born.

The many who fostered me, became me
Moulded by the hands of happiness and memories in the sun,
Shaped by the sharp blades of misery,
This is what I have become.

Yet, I say to you, I am missing a limb
With every passing moment in time, I am born anew.
With something missing, agreed
But not without a memory in the vault of thought.

The mother of change has brought unto me
A sense of reality, almost extinct in this make-shift world,
Where no one lasts, except my mother.



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Princess2011 said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 12:42 pm:
this is beautiful.. ..i must say youre amazing.. for there are many who write using heavy words..but just a few like you are able to convey the real message with such fluency and ease..short and simple..yet very deep..:) i wish i could learn something from you.. and never stop writing.. it feels great to read your work..even if i may not even be half as good as you..:)
 
Mariam.J replied...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 9:02 am :

Wow, You give me tooo much credit than I'm worth *blush*

And hey, you're article needed a few tweaks and PRESTO! we have an AWESOME article ( :

I liked your article and how much it relates to daily TEEN life :P

And heym if ya don't mind .. I have another poem up ( :

But thank you very much : )

And we all start from scratch, so chill! ALl of us here at Teen Ink have alot to learn and that's why we sign up here in the first place, right? : )

 
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Blackmirror said...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 10:27 pm:

wow, i loved this! :) it flowed well, and really got the message across in a style that i liked a lot! :) you're amazing!!! :)

((please read my poems, although they aren't as good as yours! :D ))

 
Mariam.J replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 2:43 am :

Thanks ^^ .

And yes, I went through your poems.

And stop being so modest, they're better ( :

 
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Veronique said...
Jun. 29, 2011 at 6:15 pm:
this is so good! you are an amazing writer! keep it up(:
 
Mariam.J replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 2:44 am :

@Veronique - OMG! You're making me blush ( :

Thanks alot and yes, I do hope to contribute more to this site in the future ^^ .

 
Mariam.J replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 2:48 am :

To Veronique - Thank you so much ( :

And yes, there is one more poem up, if you'd like to check it out ( :

And thank you, again ( :

 
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A.A95 said...
Jun. 29, 2011 at 1:28 pm:
i like this! I really do. people dont understand how much change and influence other that have hurt us actually HURT US.
 
Mariam.J replied...
Jun. 29, 2011 at 1:47 pm :

You know, actually... I think they DO have some clue of what they're doing to us, but they continue to do it.

Some do it knowingly, some sub-conciously :/

And thank you ( :

 
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Poetic_Mind said...
Jun. 27, 2011 at 5:13 pm:
I really do like this! I love the words you used, how you used them and they flowed quite wonderful together. I definatrly would love to see it published :)
 
Mariam.J replied...
Jun. 28, 2011 at 1:55 am :

Thanks a tonne ^^ .

Really appreciate your feedback (:

P.S It already has been published . *blush*

 
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Exploring_Sherry said...
Jun. 26, 2011 at 6:19 pm:

You have so much talent. I can feel the pain that you've gone through 'cos I've been with you every step of the road. Keep expressing (  :

 

'Where no one lasts, except my mother' :')

 
Mariam.J replied...
Jun. 27, 2011 at 1:10 am :

Hahha !

I know you have , you wouldn't stop remind me that you're always with me, through and through (':

Heeeeee* :D

Thank you ^^ <3'

 

 
Mariam.J replied...
Jun. 27, 2011 at 1:12 am :
reminding*
 
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Dark_Mind said...
Jun. 26, 2011 at 1:23 pm:
This was beautiful. I also enjoyed the first two lines, and I loved the last two also. This poem is really amazing.
 
Mariam.J replied...
Jun. 26, 2011 at 1:33 pm :

:D

Thank you so much (:

Really appreciate it . 

They're actually my favourite lines too xD

 
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GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 26, 2011 at 9:03 am:
Ths poem is so beautiful and strong. I love the graceful honesty that you put into each line. A few of my favorites: "But not without a memory in the vault of thought" and the first two "I am the child of change, adopted by many/ From the intense fusion of hope and desire, I was born" - those just paint a picture in my mind :) Loved it. Keep writing!
 
Mariam.J replied...
Jun. 26, 2011 at 9:36 am :

Awww :')

Thank you ! You've described my poem so beautifully, WOW ! :P

God, I love this site :D

And yes, you'll see more of me !

And I'm definitely gonna go through more of your articles (:

 
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WithPenAndScript said...
Jun. 24, 2011 at 10:38 am:
Pretty Good :)
 
Mariam.J replied...
Jun. 24, 2011 at 11:34 am :

A compliment of few words, but meaningful nonetheless (:

Thank you <3'

 

 
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