Butterflies

You know it’s real
When he’s not around and you still catch a chill
You know it’s real when he looks you in the eyes
And you feel thousands of butterflies.





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nickykens This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 29, 2011 at 12:55 pm
Short, sweet and completely accurate.  I like it.  It seems a little too unoriginal though.
 
dejavoo13579 replied...
May 29, 2011 at 4:37 pm
Thanks but how is it unoriginal?
 
PennyM.L replied...
Jun. 2, 2011 at 4:03 pm
I love it! it's so cute. and i don't think it's unoriginal. i mean, yeah everybody says things like that "i feel butterflies when i look at him" but i havent read a poem that says that. your poem's sweet. :)
 
dejavoo13579 replied...
Jun. 3, 2011 at 9:05 am
Thanks its nice to finally get some feed back. I dont get a lot of comments. IDK why cause i write some really good stuff.
 
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