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Walk a little slower said a little boy so small,
I follow in your footsteps and I don’t want to fall.

When I grow up, I want to be just like you,
Ill fish, hunt, and work all the time,
Sundays sit on the front pew.

Your steps are leading my life,
And I know they’re just right.

When your gone and up in heaven,
God will send down a family blessin.

So walk a little slower grandpa,
Cause’ I’m following in your footsteps,
I know you won’t let me fall.




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Angela♥ said...
May 24, 2011 at 2:52 pm:
But me more(;
 
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Anagam said...
May 19, 2011 at 10:18 pm:
awesome :) i was just thinkin of tht sayin, 'if u got time 2 do it over, do it right da 1st time'
 
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chrissie_star said...
May 19, 2011 at 2:19 pm:
nice job! love it :)
 
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Shortblueeyes224This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 19, 2011 at 11:24 am:
I like this poem alot :)
 
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brianna said...
May 19, 2011 at 10:21 am:
this is good i love it so much keep doing what your doing your good :)
 
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llothamer16 said...
May 18, 2011 at 9:03 pm:
Great message! Really inspiring poem :]
 
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JordanWilks25 said...
May 18, 2011 at 11:43 am:
I agree, i love this peom.! :D
 
AngelaS♥ replied...
May 18, 2011 at 3:05 pm :
Hi Jordan!
 
♥Clarissa replied...
May 18, 2011 at 3:07 pm :
i love you
 
AngelaS replied...
May 18, 2011 at 3:07 pm :
Ilove you more (;
 
JordanWilks25 replied...
May 18, 2011 at 8:19 pm :
I LOVE BOTH OF YOU GUYS.! :D
 
♥Clarissa replied...
May 24, 2011 at 2:53 pm :

Awwww!

i love you and you wait not you.... & you!

 
Angela♥ replied...
May 24, 2011 at 2:53 pm :

Yeaaaaaaaaaa.

K. I love you toooooo.♥

 
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kaykay101 said...
May 18, 2011 at 8:29 am:
this is a great poem!! :) if i were you i would make the last line a bit stronger but still, i looove this poem!
 
Redneck99 replied...
May 18, 2011 at 9:41 pm :

i will work on the ending. thanks 

 

 
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