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I’m sure if I was able to
I would be crying tears for you.
If only my eyes would listen
With soulful tears they would glisten.
I wish I could cry.
I couldn’t show you why,
But I’d show you how much I care.
I’d show you with Sapphires, not Rubies.
I’d show you with Diamonds and Gold.
I’d show you how I care,
And how much I think
Of you and your Beautiful Soul.




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AdrienneMPayneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 23, 2012 at 2:13 pm:
This poem feels like tears...  Beautiful tears.   Nicely done.  The effect is soft and not extremely hard hitting or dramatic, but the point is made subtly.   And it is beautiful.
 
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EtherealThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 20, 2012 at 12:27 pm:
beautiful poem, almost made me cry... good job. :')
 
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leafyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 8, 2011 at 8:53 am:
this poem is really good, the imagery is awesome!
 
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Apr. 25, 2011 at 10:07 pm:
awww so good!! i don't think i understand who you're talking to tho...what's the message you're trying to portray?
 
SpringRayynThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 26, 2011 at 7:09 pm :
This is a response to my friend on here named Zaylie. She wrote some poems and I felt like I needed to tell her that I thought her soul was beautiful, since I couldn't see her face on the computer obviously. But really I think this poem could be for anyone, I just wrote it for Zaylie.
 
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