She Goes Down

March 18, 2011
Screams and yells
a flash goes off and...
Smack she does down
Punched, hit, slapped,
No!No! No! No! Stop
I don't want to fight
Bam Bam hit hit
Down left hit one two
Right hit one two three
Screams and yells
No!No! Stop

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Blue4 said...
Aug. 10, 2011 at 9:20 am

Your language tells so much in its simplicity! The flow of your poem is very nice.

Would you mind reading some of my work, rating, and commenting? Especially my poems, I don't really write poetry, so I need feedback about them.

DNaes replied...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 11:17 am
thanks and yes i will read your work and let you know what i think
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