BE Opened Not Closed

March 6, 2011
By angeloflife GOLD, Barrington, Rhode Island
angeloflife GOLD, Barrington, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
True love is eternal,infinite, and always like itself. It is equal and pure, without violent demonstrations: it is seen with white hairs and is always young in the heart. -Honre de Balzac


Open your Mind
Breathe in and out
Close your eye's
And let everything go
Your heart feels Lighter
You feel like a Fighter
Everything seems like it'll go your way
You move on full filling your life's destiny
It's not a crime
You go out and about
Let yourself cry
The world is not a foe
You'll shine a little bit brighter
Feel looser not tighter
Every day you can pray
But never shy away

The author's comments:
i made it in 9th grade for lang and lit class. it was nice and has a lovely flow. My teacher loved it i hope you do as well.

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on Apr. 5 2011 at 4:26 pm
angeloflife GOLD, Barrington, Rhode Island
10 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
True love is eternal,infinite, and always like itself. It is equal and pure, without violent demonstrations: it is seen with white hairs and is always young in the heart. -Honre de Balzac

thank you, i thought it was but it is good to hear it from someone else.

on Apr. 5 2011 at 4:18 pm
writingcheetah7 GOLD, Barr., Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is either a daring adventure or nothing."

great job! one of your best works(:


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