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Huge brown eyes sparkle in the moonlight
As we dance and spend our first night together I find something strange
Somewhere between the dancing and beautiful spring night
I stop looking at her as just another girlfriend
What I see now is the woman I love
She is my love

I see absolute perfection when I look at her
Her loving eyes don’t just see what is on the surface
They pierce deep inside me to who I really am

She is a vision of absolute beauty
The way her thin lips begin to curl into a loving smile
The way the moonlight bounces off her skin
And radiates to give her a heavenly look
Her skin so soft and flawless
Her beauty outshines the sun and the stars
As we slow dance we lean closer
and share our first kiss




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jkmannino said...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 6:06 pm:
Tehe:) i think this poem is amazing Josh:) lol who ever you are talking about must be a really special girl to have your love:) lol and everyone makes mistakes... even me... welllll keep up the good work babe:) lol loveeee yahhhhhhhhhhhh:)
 
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