When you left...

June 9, 2008
By valerie cardona, Woodhaven, NY

I felt sorrow seep inside
my being.
it seeped into my soul.
Everything that once made sense,
Ripped to shreds.
I was left bare,
With nothing to see but
Phony smiles,
that killed me while,
You were gone.
Pitying gazes,
Looking for sadness
And longing traces
In the fa├žade that is
My face.

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on Sep. 5 2008 at 4:47 pm
lovee this poem.. whoever you are you are very talent!!!! love your work.. you should deff write a book. thanks for this .. much luck =)


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