Freedom

February 3, 2011
By Jacob.D.Poettker GOLD, Waterloo, Illinois
Jacob.D.Poettker GOLD, Waterloo, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"The Bible will keep you from sin. Sin will keep you from the Bible." D.L. Moody
"Of these three remain: faith, hope and love, but the greatest of these, is love." 1st Corrinthians 13:13


Freedom comes around
Like a door-to-door salesman
Offering his product
For a price
A price of blood
Of sacrifice
Loyalty
Freedom must be paid by men and women
Determined to win
Ready to fight
Ready to die
For their country
So the next time Freedom comes around
And he offers you his product
Take it
But be prepared
For its cost.


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on Mar. 17 2011 at 6:10 pm
Jacob.D.Poettker GOLD, Waterloo, Illinois
16 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The Bible will keep you from sin. Sin will keep you from the Bible." D.L. Moody
"Of these three remain: faith, hope and love, but the greatest of these, is love." 1st Corrinthians 13:13

Thank you very much

Alia_Tan GOLD said...
on Mar. 14 2011 at 8:06 pm
Alia_Tan GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I gotta right to sing the blues/
gotta right to moan and sigh/
I gotta right to sit and cry" From "I gotta right to sing the blues" By Louis Armstrong

Love love <3 this one!! Very well interpretation of freedom!  Awesome metaphors!




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