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Freedom

Freedom comes around
Like a door-to-door salesman
Offering his product
For a price
A price of blood
Of sacrifice
Loyalty
Freedom must be paid by men and women
Determined to win
Ready to fight
Ready to die
For their country
So the next time Freedom comes around
And he offers you his product
Take it
But be prepared
For its cost.





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Alia_TanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 8:06 pm
Love love <3 this one!! Very well interpretation of freedom!  Awesome metaphors!
 
JDPoett replied...
Mar. 17, 2011 at 6:10 pm
Thank you very much
 
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