I'M HOME

By AVERAGE, rosehill, VA

TIMELESS VOICES CORRUPTING MY THOUGHTS

BROKEN PROMISES LEAVE ME ASTRAY DREADED WORDS RELEASED FROM YOUR LIPS-

A SCRIPTURE EMBEDDED IMN MY HEART AS I BLEED.

A DARKENING SIGHT, BUT I NEVER FEEL ALONE WHEN YOUR HOLDING ME. IM WITH YOU, IM HOME.

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sherberteater said...
Apr. 20, 2012 at 10:54 am:

I love this. I have never experienced the feeling yet, but I am sure I will sometime soon. This is .... so AMAZING. I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!

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Ella1 said...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 12:15 pm:

I like it, simple but poignant :) Would you mind reading my poem A Pink Watch, Portal, and Perpetual Sea if you get a chance? Thank you!

AVERAGE replied...
Feb. 15, 2012 at 10:15 am :

thank you so much. i havent been on here in a while and totally forgot about this poem. it now reminds me of how far me and that person has come. ... your comment made my day thank you :)

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Basketball23 said...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 3:50 pm:

This is fantastic! The wording is so...so...I don't know what word I'm looking for but it's fantastic!!! I LOVE IT!!!

AVERAGE replied...
Mar. 16, 2011 at 2:00 pm :

THANK YOU SO MUCH =) IM GLAD YOU LIKED IT!

bearsfan654 replied...
Mar. 8, 2012 at 12:03 pm :

I like it, especially the fact that the narrator feels at home anywhere in the world with a specfic person.

AVERAGE replied...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 11:11 am :

ah im glad you understand :)