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TIMELESS VOICES CORRUPTING MY THOUGHTS



BROKEN PROMISES LEAVE ME ASTRAY DREADED WORDS RELEASED FROM YOUR LIPS-




A SCRIPTURE EMBEDDED IMN MY HEART AS I BLEED.



A DARKENING SIGHT, BUT I NEVER FEEL ALONE WHEN YOUR HOLDING ME. IM WITH YOU, IM HOME.





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sherberteater said...
Apr. 20, 2012 at 10:54 am

I love this. I have never experienced the feeling yet, but I am sure I will sometime soon. This is .... so AMAZING. I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!

 

 
Ella1 said...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 12:15 pm
I like it, simple but poignant :) Would you mind reading my poem A Pink Watch, Portal, and Perpetual Sea if you get a chance? Thank you!
 
AVERAGE replied...
Feb. 15, 2012 at 10:15 am
thank you so much. i havent been on here in a while and totally forgot about this poem. it now reminds me of how far me and that person has come. ... your comment made my day thank you :)
 
Basketball23 said...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 3:50 pm
This is fantastic!  The wording is so...so...I don't know what word I'm looking for but it's fantastic!!! I LOVE IT!!!
 
AVERAGE replied...
Mar. 16, 2011 at 2:00 pm
THANK YOU SO MUCH =) IM GLAD YOU LIKED IT!
 
bearsfan654 replied...
Mar. 8, 2012 at 12:03 pm
I like it, especially the fact that the narrator feels at home anywhere in the world with a specfic person. 
 
AVERAGE replied...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 11:11 am
ah im glad you understand :)
 
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