I'M HOME

January 29, 2011
By AVERAGE BRONZE, Rosehill, Virginia
AVERAGE BRONZE, Rosehill, Virginia
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TIMELESS VOICES CORRUPTING MY THOUGHTS



BROKEN PROMISES LEAVE ME ASTRAY DREADED WORDS RELEASED FROM YOUR LIPS-




A SCRIPTURE EMBEDDED IMN MY HEART AS I BLEED.



A DARKENING SIGHT, BUT I NEVER FEEL ALONE WHEN YOUR HOLDING ME. IM WITH YOU, IM HOME.


The author's comments:
A PERSON WHO CAN CREATE MY PAIN YET AT THE SAME TIME CREATE MY HAPPINESS. . .

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on Apr. 20 2012 at 10:54 am
sherberteater GOLD, Fruita, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Friends are God's way of apologizing to us for our families."

Thank God for friends like you!

I love this. I have never experienced the feeling yet, but I am sure I will sometime soon. This is .... so AMAZING. I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!

 


AVERAGE BRONZE said...
on Apr. 13 2012 at 11:11 am
AVERAGE BRONZE, Rosehill, Virginia
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ah im glad you understand :)

on Mar. 8 2012 at 12:03 pm
bearsfan654 SILVER, Elmhurst, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Feb 20, 1962, The USA launches John Glenn into Earth orbit. Something America could do fifty years ago.... but not today." - Neil deGrasse Tyson

I like it, especially the fact that the narrator feels at home anywhere in the world with a specfic person. 

AVERAGE BRONZE said...
on Feb. 15 2012 at 10:15 am
AVERAGE BRONZE, Rosehill, Virginia
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thank you so much. i havent been on here in a while and totally forgot about this poem. it now reminds me of how far me and that person has come. ... your comment made my day thank you :)

Ella1 GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 12:15 pm
Ella1 GOLD,
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I like it, simple but poignant :) Would you mind reading my poem A Pink Watch, Portal, and Perpetual Sea if you get a chance? Thank you!

AVERAGE BRONZE said...
on Mar. 16 2011 at 2:00 pm
AVERAGE BRONZE, Rosehill, Virginia
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THANK YOU SO MUCH =) IM GLAD YOU LIKED IT!

on Mar. 15 2011 at 3:50 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

This is fantastic!  The wording is so...so...I don't know what word I'm looking for but it's fantastic!!! I LOVE IT!!!




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