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I can't stop thinking about you

January 29, 2011
By Bigbirdocho SILVER, Kent, Connecticut
Bigbirdocho SILVER, Kent, Connecticut
9 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
yea


My knees start shaking,
My heart begins to race.
Why do I emotionally sink whenever I think about you?
I constantly think about you and me, finally together at last.
We met on a lone day back in August, it's been hard to let the thought of you go;
Being by your side, caring for you, making you forever happy is my one and only goal.
Why has sleeping become a challenge lately?
Why is that smile of yours etched in my brain?
And why do I lay in my chair and miss you all day and every day?
Do you know why?
I do, it's cause I love you and I promise you I always will.
You're just too good to be true, and I will never take my eyes off of you,
The reason I'm whole is due to the love I have for you.


The author's comments:
this is about someone, obviously

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on Sep. 11 2011 at 9:52 pm
remembermeplz PLATINUM, Friend, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"when the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace" -- Jimi Hendrix

this is sssoooo amazing ^-^

on Sep. 11 2011 at 11:51 am
daRklovelyblue17 GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"Where words fail, music speaks."

"I'm trying to believe in things that I don't know[...]That love can kill the pain, that truth is never vain, it turns strangers into lovers, and enemies to brothers"

Wow this is a... really great poem. I read it like 4 times and I really enjoyed it :) 

Squeaks BRONZE said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 2:51 pm
Squeaks BRONZE, Glen Allen, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Some people just don't know when to quit." --from the back of my XC team's 200 summer mile club T-shirt

So lucky. Have you told her yet? I guess I should stay mum, because I don't know the situation-- but like srry said, it's a beautiful poem, and she's a lucky one. If she's understanding, she might not even mind you write poetry. The only thing I'm concerned about is if I'm mistaken you for a guy when really you're a girl, in which case it all flips back around. ;) Or I'm terrible at perceiving such things.

--Squeaks


srry1992 said...
on Jul. 15 2011 at 7:52 pm
This girl must be a very lucky girl. This poem is beautiful.