Slipping Sand

January 14, 2011
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Sand held tightly in one's fist
Is strangled quickly
Fulfills the risk
But sand held lightly in one's palm
Is kept longer in love's realm.





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purplemoose7 said...
Feb. 14, 2011 at 11:38 pm
You are an amazing poet! ;)
 
epsax said...
Feb. 14, 2011 at 8:22 pm
I really like that. I really do.
 
purplemoose3 said...
Feb. 14, 2011 at 7:18 pm
It was a very creative and unique poem.  I love it!  Dolphindozy, keep doing what you're doing.  Because whatever you're doing, You're doing it well.
 
doctormoose6 said...
Feb. 14, 2011 at 2:27 pm
Clever and awesome.
 
Judy said...
Feb. 14, 2011 at 1:17 pm
Love this poem!  Nicely written! :)
 
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