Barbie Doll

You’re as fake as the Donney and Bourke bag you carry
As made up as a story
You think your something special but there are really a thousand like you
You’re cheap and plastic
You’re a Barbie doll.

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Emmadilemma said...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 2:06 pm:

Thank you so much!

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Germanfrenchfrie1 said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 1:11 pm:

This Poem is so cool! I thought it was a great comparison!

Emmadilemma replied...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 2:08 pm :

haahha thanks it means a lot!!! :)

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Stormyflight said...
Jan. 18, 2011 at 6:10 pm:

Bravo, great way to throw your feelings out there:)

Emmadilemma replied...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 2:08 pm :

Thank you it means a lot it's good to know i can throw my feelings out somewhere and be productive :)

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fatesknocking said...
Jan. 18, 2011 at 5:34 pm:

this made me laugh at how humorous it is to come into contact with someone who's fake. well done.

Emmadilemma replied...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 2:07 pm :

hahah thank you soooo much!!!

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bigdreamer14 said...
Jan. 18, 2011 at 12:12 pm:

I totally heart this! So creative and realistic. Man, those dumb Barbie dolls.

Emmadilemma replied...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 2:04 pm :

Thanks so much this is my first poem submitted on Teenink so it means a lot. Thanks!!!! :)