A Rose

November 12, 2007
By Passion03 BRONZE, Brea, California
Passion03 BRONZE, Brea, California
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Favorite Quote:
When I woke up this morning lying in bed, I was asking myself;
What are some of the secrets of success in life?
I found the answer right there, in my very room.
The Fan said... Be cool
The Roof said... Aim High
The Window said... See the world
The Clock said... Every minute is precious
The Mirror said... Reflect before you act
The Calendar said... Be up-to-date
The Door said... Push hard for your goals
--Unknown


A rose is something special
Given for true love.
A rose is for a mother
Who you love so very much
A rose is for a sister
Who always understands
A rose is for a friend
Who is always there
A rose is for a neighbor
Who's always helping out
A rose is something special
Given from the heart


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on Sep. 25 2009 at 6:41 pm
Passion03 BRONZE, Brea, California
2 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I woke up this morning lying in bed, I was asking myself;
What are some of the secrets of success in life?
I found the answer right there, in my very room.
The Fan said... Be cool
The Roof said... Aim High
The Window said... See the world
The Clock said... Every minute is precious
The Mirror said... Reflect before you act
The Calendar said... Be up-to-date
The Door said... Push hard for your goals
--Unknown

Thank You :]

iwantcoconow said...
on Sep. 25 2009 at 4:28 am
iwantcoconow, Bronx,ny, New York
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really nice poem 5 stars

on Sep. 24 2009 at 9:37 pm
Passion03 BRONZE, Brea, California
2 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I woke up this morning lying in bed, I was asking myself;
What are some of the secrets of success in life?
I found the answer right there, in my very room.
The Fan said... Be cool
The Roof said... Aim High
The Window said... See the world
The Clock said... Every minute is precious
The Mirror said... Reflect before you act
The Calendar said... Be up-to-date
The Door said... Push hard for your goals
--Unknown

Thank you :D

amyxu said...
on Sep. 24 2009 at 9:31 pm
This is a very sentimental poem--and I mean that in a good way! Nice job :)

on Sep. 21 2009 at 6:18 pm
Passion03 BRONZE, Brea, California
2 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I woke up this morning lying in bed, I was asking myself;
What are some of the secrets of success in life?
I found the answer right there, in my very room.
The Fan said... Be cool
The Roof said... Aim High
The Window said... See the world
The Clock said... Every minute is precious
The Mirror said... Reflect before you act
The Calendar said... Be up-to-date
The Door said... Push hard for your goals
--Unknown

Okay. Thanks.

tor10jax GOLD said...
on Sep. 21 2009 at 4:15 pm
tor10jax GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
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I really like this poem. Maybe add in some punctuation marks but besides that, I think, it's perfect.

Keep writing!

EdytD SILVER said...
on Sep. 6 2009 at 3:50 pm
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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Thanks! I'd love if you took a look at my poetry; thanks!

EdytD SILVER said...
on Sep. 6 2009 at 3:49 pm
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
6 articles 0 photos 258 comments
you're welcome! I'd love if you took a look at my poetry. Thanks!!

on Sep. 6 2009 at 3:47 pm
Passion03 BRONZE, Brea, California
2 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I woke up this morning lying in bed, I was asking myself;
What are some of the secrets of success in life?
I found the answer right there, in my very room.
The Fan said... Be cool
The Roof said... Aim High
The Window said... See the world
The Clock said... Every minute is precious
The Mirror said... Reflect before you act
The Calendar said... Be up-to-date
The Door said... Push hard for your goals
--Unknown

thanks

this is the kind of feedback i need

i'll keep your advice in mind

EdytD SILVER said...
on Sep. 6 2009 at 3:33 pm
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
6 articles 0 photos 258 comments
This is neat, and the flow is great. I think, however, it's almost stating who you're giving the rose to - if you put some imagery, perhaps of the rose, perhaps of the ppl you're giving it to or why you are giving it to them, the reader could better relate to your poem and picture it in his/her mind.

Good job!


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