A Rose

A rose is something special
Given for true love.
A rose is for a mother
Who you love so very much
A rose is for a sister
Who always understands
A rose is for a friend
Who is always there
A rose is for a neighbor
Who's always helping out
A rose is something special
Given from the heart





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iwantcoconow said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 4:28 am
really nice poem 5 stars
 
Passion03 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 6:41 pm
Thank You :]
 
amyxu said...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 9:31 pm
This is a very sentimental poem--and I mean that in a good way! Nice job :)
 
Passion03 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 9:37 pm
Thank you :D
 
tor10jax said...
Sept. 21, 2009 at 4:15 pm
I really like this poem. Maybe add in some punctuation marks but besides that, I think, it's perfect.
Keep writing!
 
Passion03 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 21, 2009 at 6:18 pm
Okay. Thanks.
 
EdytD said...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 3:33 pm
This is neat, and the flow is great. I think, however, it's almost stating who you're giving the rose to - if you put some imagery, perhaps of the rose, perhaps of the ppl you're giving it to or why you are giving it to them, the reader could better relate to your poem and picture it in his/her mind.
Good job!
 
Passion03 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 3:47 pm
thanks
this is the kind of feedback i need
i'll keep your advice in mind
 
EdytD replied...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 3:49 pm
you're welcome! I'd love if you took a look at my poetry. Thanks!!
 
EdytD replied...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 3:50 pm
Thanks! I'd love if you took a look at my poetry; thanks!
 
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