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When you left me behind,
I still wanted you to be mine.
You walked out on me,
I just stood there in the breeze.
After all that happened,
I could not breathe,
I fell to the ground as you turned around.
You ran after me and
then when you touched me, I could breathe.
Then I got up and said, "Look at what you did when you left me behind."



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Bethani said...
Jan. 15, 2011 at 11:15 am
I love your work! You did a great job! I think you could've explained with some more detail or made it longer but other than that, I think you're doing great.
 
lizzy1002 replied...
Jan. 15, 2011 at 11:59 am
thank u bethani i thought i could have made it longer after i wrote it !
 
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