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when you left me behind..

December 27, 2010
By lizzy1002 GOLD, Palm Bay, Florida
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" I rather die for somthing then live for nothing"-Unknown

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When you left me behind,
I still wanted you to be mine.
You walked out on me,
I just stood there in the breeze.
After all that happened,
I could not breathe,
I fell to the ground as you turned around.
You ran after me and
then when you touched me, I could breathe.
Then I got up and said, "Look at what you did when you left me behind."

© Jaleh A., West Jordan, UT

The author's comments:
Some times you have to let go of the things that matter to you the must because one day when its hurts so much it might return .
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lizzy1002 GOLD said...
on Jan. 15 2011 at 11:59 am
lizzy1002 GOLD, Palm Bay, Florida
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thank u bethani i thought i could have made it longer after i wrote it !
Bethani GOLD said...
on Jan. 15 2011 at 11:15 am
Bethani GOLD, Highlands Ranch, Colorado
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I love your work! You did a great job! I think you could've explained with some more detail or made it longer but other than that, I think you're doing great.