Ode to the Video Game Loading Screen

December 7, 2010
By Renden BRONZE, Mesa, Arizona
Renden BRONZE, Mesa, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Don't believe in yourself, believe in me who believes in you!


No one likes to…
Wait…
For their games to load…
The television screen…
Taunting…
Me…
Leading me to…
Madness…
As I read the screen…
Again and again I…
Continue to…
Read those wretched words…
“Loading. Please Wait…
Loading. Please Wait…
Loading. Please Wait…”
Then I wonder…
Why…
Is it so polite?...
Saying “please”…
Every…
Time…
Then I imagine…
My…
Response to…
“Loading. Wait…
Loading. Wait…
Loading. Wait…”
I get upset and…
Quit…
The game…
Thank you…
Loading…
Screen…
At…
Least…
You…
Are…
Polite…
About…
It………
LOAD COMPLETE.


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kavenoff777 said...
on Jan. 25 2011 at 5:55 pm
Nice! I like!

on Dec. 23 2010 at 2:28 am
Hinoya17 SILVER, Bellflower, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Watch your thoughts, they become words.
Watch your words, they become actions.
Watch your actions, they become habits.
Watch your habits, they become your character.
Watch your character, it becomes your destiny. "

that was rly interesting ren:] nice work


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