Death take me

November 15, 2010
By Collide SILVER, Portsmouth, Ohio
Collide SILVER, Portsmouth, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
i want to show them im not just some piece in their games - peeta from the hunger games


Oh please death just take me
I dont want to be here anymore
I hate this place you see
I want to fly high i want to soar

Oh please death just take me
Dont torture me like this
I want to leave just to be free
frome th worlds hateful fist

Oh please death just take me
I want to lie in a grave
Death you are my key
My essence will you save

Oh please death just take me
I dont want to be here anymore
I hate this place you see
Please open deaths door


The author's comments:
Sometimes i think death would be better than this world

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Collide SILVER said...
on Sep. 2 2011 at 2:45 pm
Collide SILVER, Portsmouth, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
i want to show them im not just some piece in their games - peeta from the hunger games

i dont see everthing in this context its hard to exsplain how i write them and why i write

on Apr. 19 2011 at 2:21 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 488 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

I really like all of your work I just feel really bad that that's how you think and see things.

Collide SILVER said...
on Apr. 18 2011 at 2:45 pm
Collide SILVER, Portsmouth, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
i want to show them im not just some piece in their games - peeta from the hunger games

thanks i glad you like it :)

on Mar. 18 2011 at 8:41 am
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 488 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

The word usage and rhyming scheme used in this is amazing!  The idea behind it is frightening!  Put it together and you get a FANTASTIC poem!!!


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