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Oh please death just take me
I dont want to be here anymore
I hate this place you see
I want to fly high i want to soar

Oh please death just take me
Dont torture me like this
I want to leave just to be free
frome th worlds hateful fist

Oh please death just take me
I want to lie in a grave
Death you are my key
My essence will you save

Oh please death just take me
I dont want to be here anymore
I hate this place you see
Please open deaths door





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Collide said...
Sept. 2, 2011 at 2:45 pm
i dont see everthing in this context its hard to exsplain how i write them and why i write
 
Basketball23 said...
Mar. 18, 2011 at 8:41 am
The word usage and rhyming scheme used in this is amazing!  The idea behind it is frightening!  Put it together and you get a FANTASTIC poem!!!
 
Controling_My_Darkness replied...
Apr. 18, 2011 at 2:45 pm
thanks i glad you like it :)
 
Basketball23 replied...
Apr. 19, 2011 at 2:21 pm
I really like all of your work I just feel really bad that that's how you think and see things.
 
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