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If I could read minds
How lucky I would be
If I looked into yours
I really wonder what I’d see...

What are your passions?
What do you fear?
What makes you laugh?
What makes you tear?

I’d see your deepest desires
Your biggest regrets
Your childhood memories
If you like blondes or brunettes

I’d listen to your worries
And help you make it through
I’d listen to your wishes
And try to make them all come true

I’d understand your goals
And I’d support you
I’d look into your eyes
And see your point of view

I wouldn’t have this confusion
No more deciphering of clues
There would be no more guessing
I could stand right in your shoes

I'd know if you really care
And most importantly
I’d know your true intentions
And how you feel about me...



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Acalleq This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 5:48 pm:

amazing, i've always wondered what people close to me thought. if what they said was really what they meant or if they were just saying it. thanks again

:)

 
bkcrider92 replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 5:52 pm :
No problem! Thank you for the feedback! I love when other people enjoy my poems as much as I enjoy writing them! =D
 
Acalleq This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 5:52 pm :
by the way, could you check out my new one called Too Many Questions? i'd love to hear what you gotta say about it, don't hold back please
 
bkcrider92 replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 5:56 pm :
Yes I will definitely take a look =)
 
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CarolynQ said...
Jun. 21, 2011 at 11:43 am:
Love the perfected thought on this. I wish I was a mindreader. hhaha great title for your piece.
 
bkcrider92 replied...
Jun. 21, 2011 at 12:42 pm :
Thank you very much! =)
 
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HasntWrittenInAgesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 10:11 pm:
I got it for you, say "you dont like me do you"? i dont mean "like" like LIKE like, I mean it like "i cant stand you like." you can tell it all by how they answer. but anyway i am restanding and underlating to this. I'm obsessed with just about everybody.
 
bkcrider92 replied...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 10:18 pm :
Haha thanks =D
 
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