
thudding with purpose
beating like a drum
through my rib cage
making my vision blur
my world is tilting
all because of three little words
“I love you.”
Focusing intently
on the simple task
of breathing

this is so sweet:)
""focusing on the simple task of breathing""
i like it alot
This poem is so sweet and yet funny because I can just imagine a cartoon character being in a blur with the phrsase "I love you" surrounding him/her until him/her falls from exhaustment of trying to breathe and stand all at once. Great job and write on Bubbles!
This poem is good granted. It reprents those sweet little feelings we all desire. But is it really love? Love comes day by day, you can never know if it is true. You can't know if their love is the same as yours, so as your heart thumps and you are short of breath remember not to put too much hope on those 3 little words... becayse they might not be true.
I really love this! it reminds me of how i felt when my boo said those three words to me.
this piece is absolutely amazing lovely job!
i really loved it i actually that feeling not to long ago and could not figure out how to word it so thanx
its not very good, im sorry, but its really bad.
i really love this poem it reminds me of a past relationship....
GOOD JOB!!!
i am totally speechless i was the same way i love it!!!
I love it! especially the last part its really cute<3
omg, totally speechless...maximum awesomness!!! I'm
Wow. That was really well written. Keep writing it makes life worth living
That was really good. Like, I've been trying to say that for a really long time, but I couldn't find the words to do so. Thank you for showing me the words.
thats really cute.
short.sweet. to the point.Good Job.
i loved it...u described exactly what ive been trying to put into words but couldnt seen to get it to come out right
*sparse applause from the crowd* pretty good you could work on your rhythm a little bit though. In other words the gradation of syllables is to abrupt but all in all not bad
I no how this feels and u describe it soooo well!
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