Pantoum: Come back

October 2, 2010
By kayx3ftw PLATINUM, Woodbridge, New Jersey
kayx3ftw PLATINUM, Woodbridge, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"You don't get another chance, Life is no Nintendo game"- Eminem


Without you it's quiet here
Lonely and dark
The shadows haunt
As i stand watching

Lonely and dark
The silence scares
As i stand watching
Waiting and hoping

The silence scares
As unforgiving sadness engulfs me
Waiting and hoping
Rescue me

As unforgiving sadness engulfs me
I'm sorry
Rescue me
I need your love

I'm sorry
Without you I'm alone
I need your love
I'm cold, i want your warm embrace again

Without you I'm alone
I just realized
I'm cold, i want your warm embrace again
And i just wanted to let you know

I just realized
The shadows haunt
And i just wanted to let you know
Without you its quiet here.



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on Jun. 15 2014 at 10:49 am
OzymandiasAengus PLATINUM, Bronx, New York
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Cool poem. I especially liked the last verse. I myself just found out about pantoums, and I think the form is really powerful.




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