August 20, 2010
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Continuous lies
Feeling fragile from the fear
I'm looking for a place
so I can heal

He's a veteran in hurting
That, I just found
Feeling solitary
Even with people around

They said he was a good person
But it was a myth
HE cancelled my oxygen
Now I can't breathe

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LaliBoo said...
Nov. 14, 2010 at 8:18 pm
Thanks! I'm glad you like it and its good to be recognized for my work.
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 11, 2010 at 3:10 pm
This is a good poem, and an interesting idea. It illustrates the fragile nature of humankind, despite its apparent simplicity. Well done.
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