Broken...

August 20, 2010
By ItsAlly SILVER, Humacao, Other
ItsAlly SILVER, Humacao, Other
6 articles 6 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you wish to see in the world" -M.Ghandi


Continuous lies
Feeling fragile from the fear
I'm looking for a place
so I can heal

He's a veteran in hurting
That, I just found
Feeling solitary
Even with people around

They said he was a good person
But it was a myth
HE cancelled my oxygen
Now I can't breathe


The author's comments:
I made it up for English class. It has some of the vocabulary words the teacher gave us.

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ItsAlly SILVER said...
on Nov. 14 2010 at 8:18 pm
ItsAlly SILVER, Humacao, Other
6 articles 6 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you wish to see in the world" -M.Ghandi

Thanks! I'm glad you like it and its good to be recognized for my work.

on Sep. 11 2010 at 3:10 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

This is a good poem, and an interesting idea. It illustrates the fragile nature of humankind, despite its apparent simplicity. Well done.


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