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Continuous lies
Feeling fragile from the fear
I'm looking for a place
so I can heal

He's a veteran in hurting
That, I just found
Feeling solitary
Even with people around

They said he was a good person
But it was a myth
HE cancelled my oxygen
Now I can't breathe




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LaliBoo said...
Nov. 14, 2010 at 8:18 pm:
Thanks! I'm glad you like it and its good to be recognized for my work.
 
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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 11, 2010 at 3:10 pm:
This is a good poem, and an interesting idea. It illustrates the fragile nature of humankind, despite its apparent simplicity. Well done.
 
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