CRUCIFIED

July 28, 2010
By book-keeper26 BRONZE, Oak Ridge, New Jersey
book-keeper26 BRONZE, Oak Ridge, New Jersey
3 articles 8 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
People come in and out of our lives for a reason, the trick, is knowing when to let them go.. and when to hold onto them even tighter.


The sky was scorching red
A crown of thorns adorned his head
Ridged was he
Bent down on one knee
With our heavy burden he trod
Struggling up the dank sod
It was our cross to bear
For we were entrapped in Satan’s snare
He carried the cross up the mountain
And poured on mankind a fountain
Of love, mercy and grace
I will never forget his face
Torn and bleeding
The Savior we had been needing
A mighty lion not to be tamed
And yet not ashamed
Of the scorn and the mocking
Our hatred for him was shocking
They did not know what they were doing
Chanting his death, screaming and booing
A perfect lamb was he
Dying to save you and me
Dirty with the sins of the land
A nail pierced through each hand
But he did not complain
He just hung there, waiting to be slain
This memory is etched in my heart and my head
For Jesus did not remain dead
He arose on the third day
In such a miraculous way
The wound in his side and hands did remain
Now we await him to come again
And take us up with Him in the sky
To meet our Lord, God on High

The author's comments:
Jesus... the single most controversial individual to ever have lived (on earth), came as one of us, died the most degrading death(especially since he was a king and God)and rose on the 3rd day, taking away all sins thus proving all that all he said was truth and love. my soul is saved what about yours?

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on Jul. 13 2011 at 7:53 pm
book-keeper26 BRONZE, Oak Ridge, New Jersey
3 articles 8 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
People come in and out of our lives for a reason, the trick, is knowing when to let them go.. and when to hold onto them even tighter.

thank you sooo much, i've even gotten dismissed from poetry competitions for my work because it antagonizes those of other belefs... :) what can ya do! haha thank so much again.

on Jul. 13 2011 at 1:28 pm
sweetly_broken GOLD, Garner, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
We never know how big we are until we are asked to rise.

Hey, I clicked on this poem really hoping that it'd be about this, and let me just tell you that it's fantastic! Remember the verse in John 15, "Before the world hated you, they hated me also." And I also love your other poem "The Thief." Just thought I'd point that out as well. :)

on Sep. 17 2010 at 12:38 pm
book-keeper26 BRONZE, Oak Ridge, New Jersey
3 articles 8 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
People come in and out of our lives for a reason, the trick, is knowing when to let them go.. and when to hold onto them even tighter.

it sickens me how many people there are who hate me because of what i believe.


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