For Those Who Fight Shadows

July 15, 2010
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Those who fight shadows,
Win in the dark,
When the lights cold reflection,
With leave, takes its mark.

Those who fight creatures,
Win in the light,
When the nights blinding burden,
Stays far from their sight.

But those who fight people,
May not win at all,
For when winners make losers,
Their end doubly calls.





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JewBoi said...
Aug. 22, 2010 at 9:12 pm
I like this due to its background of how so few words are spoken and yet so much is said...
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 3:41 am
Thankyou so much!!!       
 
LoveTravelTell said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 9:47 pm
Quite interesting views you have.
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 3:41 am
Thanks so much!!!
 
Calamine16 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 12:06 pm
Great rythm! I love the voice you have in this piece.
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 3:40 am
Thanks!!!    
 
Clopsey said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 11:10 am
I really like this one. I think my favorite of your pieces. :) Great job, keep it up!
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 22, 2010 at 4:26 pm
Thanks!!!!!
 
Najima776 said...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 10:44 pm
I love it.
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 12:38 pm
Thankyou!!!!
 
liv.laf.love13 said...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 10:38 pm
awesome lol
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 12:37 pm
Thanks!!    
 
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