Hopeless

too big to fix and and a struggle to handle
the clock has run out like the wick on the candle.
Its spun out of control, crashed and burned,
and in the end there's no lesson learned.
no shoulder to lean on and no tears left to cry,
no longer of the future will I let my mind pry.





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crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 11:55 am
Wow this  is so powerfull!!! i love the depth and emotion!! could u please rate and check out my work?? thatd be great!! thanks and ur so good!!
 
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Aug. 18, 2010 at 12:02 pm
Thank You!! and I would love to!
 
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