The Suprise

July 23, 2010
By CrystalClear BRONZE, Federal Way, Washington
CrystalClear BRONZE, Federal Way, Washington
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Dinner by candle light
My man well dressed
A fancy dinner place
I'm looking my best.

After our meals
He takes me back home
A surprise is waiting
But I do not know

He covers my eyes
And counts down from three
Removing my hands
The surprise I now see

Rose petals and balloons
Candles and chocolates galore
I turn around to him,
One of his knees on the floor.

My hands to my mouth
My eyes in soft tears
But a smile then forms
As my make-up now smears

He grabs my left hand,
And stares deep into my eyes
" Honey I Love you,
Do you like your surprise? "

I nod in response.
As he then proceeds
" Baby I Love you,
So please. Marry me? "

The author's comments:
My friends mom had just got proposed to. So i thought it would be fun to write about it.

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