LAST DAY

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WITHOUT A DAY OF REGRET
WITH MOMENTS I WILL NOT FORGET
I REMEMBER WITH ALL I HAVE LEFT
THE THINGS I LOVE THE BEST

MY LIFE IS NEAR THE END
BUT I’M AFRAID I CANNOT MEND
BUT TODAY I FINALLY FEEL OKAY
AS I LIVE IN MY LAST DAY





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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 7:43 pm
This poem made me very happy. Thank you for writing it.
 
leneypanini replied...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 8:22 pm
your welcome:) sorry to ask but how so?
 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 4:10 pm

I may have just been in a jolly mood when I commented. But what I personally took from the poem was a person who was about to die, and looking back on their life.

They had been through good and bad times, and they were very peaceful about it. I like that idea. Sorry if I surprised you with unexpected cheerfulness.

 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 4:12 pm
I may have just been in a cheerful mood when I commented. But what I personally took from the poem was a person who was about to die, looking back on their life peacefully. Sorry to surprise you with unexpected jolliness.
 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 4:13 pm
Sorry to comment twice.
 
leneypanini replied...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 9:59 pm
lol and then a third time! aha jk:) its alright:)
 
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