Our Love

June 6, 2010
By niesh13 SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
niesh13 SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Love Me, Hate Me. I Really Don't Care .
Truth Is...Life Goes On , With or Without You


The Years Went By Quickly
I Never Even Heard The Clock Ticking
I Loved Yu Continuesly On & Off For Years
& Even Tho It Hurts, There Were Never Any Tears
There Has To Be Some Sort of Connection
Even If Its Love or Infactuation
You Say Somewhere The Love is There But I Can Barely See It
I Guess Yu Was Jus Jokin Bcuz I Realy Cnt Believe It
I Have To Get Over Yu Bcuz Your " Like " Is All in Vain
Seeing You w/ Her Is Causing Too Much Pain
This Might be Our Las Year 2gether Ill Cherish It n Every Way
But Ill Nvr Stop Wishin 4 Yu 2 Wake Up & Love Me 1 Day.


The author's comments:
2 My Lifelong Crush Lol. I Wrote This Las Yr.

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on Oct. 10 2010 at 8:13 pm
deus-ex-machina14 BRONZE, Stewartsville, New Jersey
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"There are two main tragedies in life. One is not getting what one wants, and the other is getting it." -Oscar Wilde

I think some of the mis-spelling of the words and grammatical fractures make it more unique and enjoyable to read.

niesh13 SILVER said...
on Oct. 10 2010 at 1:52 pm
niesh13 SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
6 articles 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love Me, Hate Me. I Really Don't Care .
Truth Is...Life Goes On , With or Without You

Sorry Im So Late. But Can You Tell Me What Saher Means By That Comment?

on Jul. 25 2010 at 7:18 am
deus-ex-machina14 BRONZE, Stewartsville, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"There are two main tragedies in life. One is not getting what one wants, and the other is getting it." -Oscar Wilde

You're welcome!

niesh13 SILVER said...
on Jul. 24 2010 at 1:45 pm
niesh13 SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
6 articles 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love Me, Hate Me. I Really Don't Care .
Truth Is...Life Goes On , With or Without You

Thank Yu.!

niesh13 SILVER said...
on Jul. 24 2010 at 1:43 pm
niesh13 SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
6 articles 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love Me, Hate Me. I Really Don't Care .
Truth Is...Life Goes On , With or Without You

@ Macx14 Thank Yu.!

on Jul. 22 2010 at 1:55 pm
deus-ex-machina14 BRONZE, Stewartsville, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"There are two main tragedies in life. One is not getting what one wants, and the other is getting it." -Oscar Wilde

I love this! It communicates the idea well and is articulate in a way you don't see every day. Great job!

saher BRONZE said...
on Jul. 7 2010 at 9:04 pm
saher BRONZE, East Windsor, Connecticut
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Develop success from failures. Discouragement and failure are two of the surest stepping stones to success.
Dale Carnegie

the typeing makes it more intersting.




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