Your last words!

June 8, 2010
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You treat me like an imbecile
You make me go insane
When i tell you i dont care
You insult me again and again.

You usually dont treat me well
And you blame it all on me
When i say dont get offensive
You turn around and leave

You tell me that im an idiot
And you may think that its alright
But one day it will all backfire
And i will leave into the night!

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brax34 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 11:56 am
really good, but the patterns are inconsistent (i think it would be better if they werent) but you can do whatever you want with it because it is free verse.
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