Memories

June 4, 2010
By Rose2446 BRONZE, New Haven, Connecticut
Rose2446 BRONZE, New Haven, Connecticut
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Think about the future
Think abput the past
Remember the good times treasure them in your heart
Keep thinking
Keep living
With your head held high
Facing life and ready to fight
Fight for your dreams
To rise and reach the stars


The author's comments:
Sometimes you have some memories that disturb your life and eveything that you do so that's why you should think about them and talk about them because I'm sure that you are not alone but also don't let those memories get in the way of your dreams and keep facing life and fighting for them your dreams

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Jaquie BRONZE said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 8:36 pm
Jaquie BRONZE, West Palm Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
This is certainly one of my favorites: "I will become even more undignified than this, and I will be humiliated in my own eyes." -2 Samuel 6:22

This piece is good, but you should spell check your work before you submit it. Silly mistakes can be avoided this way. We're all guilty of slipping up now and then but there are some errors in here that make me question whether you re-read it at all. Maybe I'm being to harsh. . . I just really enjoyed this piece so I wanted you to see what could be done to improve it. Please take this critisism constructively.

God bless and keep writing,

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on Jul. 4 2010 at 1:02 pm
SapphireDream081 BRONZE, Danbury, Connecticut
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I am my name but no one ever spells it right...

I like this. You are good

on Jul. 3 2010 at 1:10 pm
jcampgirl PLATINUM, New Caney, Texas
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when you lie to someone you tell them thay are not worth the truth

ya yarry good

on Jul. 3 2010 at 6:35 am
hello.beautiful PLATINUM, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Look at the nations and watch— and be utterly amazed. For I am going to do something in your days that you would not believe, even if you were told. -Habakkuk 1:5

You're a really good writer. This is excellent, keep it up!

on Jul. 2 2010 at 11:12 pm
krissy775 SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
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"everything happens for a reason"

ohh! i love this one! this one is rly short, but rly good. i hits home for me too. some of my memories haunt me and affect my everyday life...and its kinda been hard for me. so i understand !! bravo!

on Jul. 1 2010 at 1:55 pm
jcampgirl PLATINUM, New Caney, Texas
34 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
when you lie to someone you tell them thay are not worth the truth

hay this is prety good.


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