June 4, 2010
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Think about the future
Think abput the past
Remember the good times treasure them in your heart
Keep thinking
Keep living
With your head held high
Facing life and ready to fight
Fight for your dreams
To rise and reach the stars

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Jaquie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 8:36 pm

This piece is good, but you should spell check your work before you submit it. Silly mistakes can be avoided this way. We're all guilty of slipping up now and then but there are some errors in here that make me question whether you re-read it at all. Maybe I'm being to harsh. . . I just really enjoyed this piece so I wanted you to see what could be done to improve it. Please take this critisism constructively.

God bless and keep writing,


SapphireDream081 said...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 1:02 pm
I like this. You are good
Ashley P. said...
Jul. 3, 2010 at 1:10 pm
ya yarry good
hello.beautiful said...
Jul. 3, 2010 at 6:35 am
You're a really good writer. This is excellent, keep it up!
Ashley P. said...
Jul. 1, 2010 at 1:55 pm
hay this is prety good.
krissy775 replied...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 11:12 pm
ohh! i love this one! this one is rly short, but rly good. i hits home for me too. some of my memories haunt me and affect my everyday life...and its kinda been hard for me. so i understand !! bravo!
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