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What happens when smoke clouds tip into the sky,
When the birds lose their homes in the clouds,
When the glossy glass windows are tinted with red,
And the gleaming new gold reflects doubts.

When the gray of up high turns from steel to drift ash,
When the bright shiny blue disappears,
When the vapors of black replace pillars of wood,
When the embers of hope turn to real.

What happens when those polished buildings fall down,
When the light hits behind at the lies,
When the bright covered bones of the monster are found,
And the smoke that they hide fills the sky.





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Cassiea. said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 7:34 pm

And also i forgot to mention check out my story A haunting Dream when you can!

Abosulutely amazing work!

Speechless words.

 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 11:19 pm
Thanks!! ill check it out!!
 
Cassiea. said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 7:24 pm
WOW! This has so much detail and thought into it. this is quite well written.
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 11:19 pm
Thankyou!!
 
brax34 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 28, 2010 at 11:42 am
Your stuff is soooooo awesome!  you're an amazing poet!
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 28, 2010 at 8:33 pm
Thankyou sooo much for commenting and reading all my work!!! it really means alot!!!
 
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