A Question

May 29, 2010
By crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.


What happens when smoke clouds tip into the sky,
When the birds lose their homes in the clouds,
When the glossy glass windows are tinted with red,
And the gleaming new gold reflects doubts.

When the gray of up high turns from steel to drift ash,
When the bright shiny blue disappears,
When the vapors of black replace pillars of wood,
When the embers of hope turn to real.

What happens when those polished buildings fall down,
When the light hits behind at the lies,
When the bright covered bones of the monster are found,
And the smoke that they hide fills the sky.


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on Jul. 28 2010 at 11:19 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks!! ill check it out!!

on Jul. 28 2010 at 11:19 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou!!

on Jul. 28 2010 at 7:34 pm
Cassiea. SILVER, Homestead, Florida
5 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
If I find in myself desires which nothing in this world can satisfy, the only logical explanation is that I was made for another world.
-C.S. Lewis

And also i forgot to mention check out my story A haunting Dream when you can!

Abosulutely amazing work!

Speechless words.


on Jul. 28 2010 at 7:24 pm
Cassiea. SILVER, Homestead, Florida
5 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
If I find in myself desires which nothing in this world can satisfy, the only logical explanation is that I was made for another world.
-C.S. Lewis

WOW! This has so much detail and thought into it. this is quite well written.

on Jun. 28 2010 at 8:33 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou sooo much for commenting and reading all my work!!! it really means alot!!!

on Jun. 28 2010 at 11:42 am
thezebrasgray PLATINUM, Taylorsville, Utah
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Your stuff is soooooo awesome!  you're an amazing poet!


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