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Storm
May 22, 2010
A bright-lit city
Lights already on
Evening, cloudy night
Night floats on like swan.
Raining, pouring now
Quite sudden, vicious
Loud thunder rumbles
The sounds, malicious.
White bright lightning strikes
City lights humbled
By dazzling sky-fire
Leaving folk jumbled.
Inconspicuous,
Gradual, Storm ends
Thunder mumbles away
Goodbye, Storm, my friend.
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Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Jun. 23 2010 at 8:39 pm
wow i really like this!!! its really good-very well written and very descriptive!!! please check out some of my work if you get the chance! :)
Shannon_Bananon said...
on Jun. 23 2010 at 4:05 pm
Well, you say it sounds malicious and vicious, but then at the end you say it's your friend. Don't you think those are harsh adjectives to be using on a buddy? I certainly think so.
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 22 2010 at 5:31 pm
This is very rhythmic. I am glad that it did not rhyme. It conjured a very strong image of a storm.
I used to be afraid of storms, but not I find them to be very beautiful.
beautifulworld SILVER said...
on Jun. 22 2010 at 10:30 am
It's very nice. I liked the rhythm you put to the words
Shannon_Bananon said...
on Jun. 22 2010 at 7:25 am
I feel as though it contradicts at times, but otherwise good. :D (I'm missing the lack of bees.)
