If God gave you a heart...

May 19, 2010
If God gave you a heart, What would you do?
Would you keep it safe, warm and close to you?

If he gave you a heart,would you give it a bath?
And let it drown in your jealousy,greed and wrath?

If he gave you a heart, what would you say?
Would you keep it and love it?
Or give it away?

Now answer these Silently,Keep to yourself.
Would you give it a bed?
Or a place on the shelf?

Now I have one more question.
I promise it's not lame.

If God gave you HIS heart...
Would your answers be the same?





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Gabriella.MM said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 7:12 pm
This inspired me so much. Its really beautiful. The wording, metaphors, everything is great. Im trying to help my friend with God atm, and Im going to read this to her. Amazing job!
 
XxWritingWizxX replied...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 1:35 am
thank you very much :)
 
Gabriella.MM replied...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 6:14 pm

Ur welcome:)

The endings my favorite:)

 
XxWritingWizxX replied...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 11:14 pm
thats also one of my favorite parts haha. makes you think a little =)
 
Gabriella.MM replied...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 11:29 am
exactly!!! This should deff be in the top poems
 
XxWritingWizxX replied...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 10:41 pm
haha i doubt it would be lol i dont even know how people do that haha
 
Gabriella.MM replied...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 7:22 am
Im not sure either...maybe if you get a lot of comments. But ppl need to read this. 
 
XxWritingWizxX replied...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 10:24 pm
haha well how do i get more people to read it?
 
Gabriella.MM replied...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 8:40 am
I have not a clue lol:P
 
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