If God gave you a heart...

May 19, 2010
By Puzzlepeace GOLD, Bellevue, Nebraska
Puzzlepeace GOLD, Bellevue, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"Music is all around you, all you have to do... is listen."
-August Rush


If God gave you a heart, What would you do?
Would you keep it safe, warm and close to you?

If he gave you a heart,would you give it a bath?
And let it drown in your jealousy,greed and wrath?

If he gave you a heart, what would you say?
Would you keep it and love it?
Or give it away?

Now answer these Silently,Keep to yourself.
Would you give it a bed?
Or a place on the shelf?

Now I have one more question.
I promise it's not lame.

If God gave you HIS heart...
Would your answers be the same?


The author's comments:
God inspired me, and also to help kids answer these questions so they could possibly get more in touch with their faith depending on their answers.

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on Aug. 4 2010 at 8:40 am
Gabriella.MM BRONZE, Underhill, Vermont
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I have not a clue lol:P

on Aug. 3 2010 at 10:24 pm
Puzzlepeace GOLD, Bellevue, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"Music is all around you, all you have to do... is listen."
-August Rush

haha well how do i get more people to read it?

on Aug. 3 2010 at 7:22 am
Gabriella.MM BRONZE, Underhill, Vermont
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Im not sure either...maybe if you get a lot of comments. But ppl need to read this. 

on Aug. 2 2010 at 10:41 pm
Puzzlepeace GOLD, Bellevue, Nebraska
10 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Music is all around you, all you have to do... is listen."
-August Rush

haha i doubt it would be lol i dont even know how people do that haha

on Aug. 2 2010 at 11:29 am
Gabriella.MM BRONZE, Underhill, Vermont
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exactly!!! This should deff be in the top poems

on Aug. 1 2010 at 11:14 pm
Puzzlepeace GOLD, Bellevue, Nebraska
10 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Music is all around you, all you have to do... is listen."
-August Rush

thats also one of my favorite parts haha. makes you think a little =)

on Aug. 1 2010 at 6:14 pm
Gabriella.MM BRONZE, Underhill, Vermont
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Ur welcome:)

The endings my favorite:)


on Aug. 1 2010 at 1:35 am
Puzzlepeace GOLD, Bellevue, Nebraska
10 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Music is all around you, all you have to do... is listen."
-August Rush

thank you very much :)

on Jul. 12 2010 at 7:12 pm
Gabriella.MM BRONZE, Underhill, Vermont
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This inspired me so much. Its really beautiful. The wording, metaphors, everything is great. Im trying to help my friend with God atm, and Im going to read this to her. Amazing job!


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