Over You

May 13, 2010
By bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
32 articles 0 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.


It brOke my heart,but
i quickly discoVered that
i nevEr need you
dont worry, im oveR you
you thought i would shed mY tears for you tOnight as i lay in bed
you obvioUsly need 2 get a life!


The author's comments:
this is a mesostic...the capital letters read OVERYOU if u read them going down.

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on Oct. 8 2010 at 6:16 pm
bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
32 articles 0 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.

i loved ur stuff! nd i ur a christian! same here nd i love mercy me nd david crowder also !!!!! u noe hillsong united? i love him!

on Oct. 4 2010 at 6:32 am
elisianicole101 PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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Nothing ever truely dies, it just transforms into something beautiful

Your welcome and thank you(hope you like it)lol

on Oct. 3 2010 at 2:54 pm
bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
32 articles 0 photos 111 comments

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Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.

thanx so much=)  imma check out ur stuff

on Sep. 30 2010 at 6:53 am
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

Alex  the one with the gangsta eyes

on Sep. 29 2010 at 8:52 pm
elisianicole101 PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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Nothing ever truely dies, it just transforms into something beautiful

Love it gurl!!! Its super good!!

on Sep. 29 2010 at 8:51 pm
elisianicole101 PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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Nothing ever truely dies, it just transforms into something beautiful

Which of your sisters is she?

on Aug. 24 2010 at 5:24 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

lol that is soo funny... GangstaEyes is my sister!! in real life!!!! And that means alot that im your fav!!

Thanks!!!!


on Aug. 24 2010 at 11:14 am
bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
32 articles 0 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.

yea... thats when i rotw it. when he broke up w me. nd thank ur stuff is REALLY awesome. idk if u read gangastaeyes stuff but u nd her r my fav. authors on teenink!

on Aug. 24 2010 at 11:13 am
bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
32 articles 0 photos 111 comments

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Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.

haha.. ill look at ur work. nd those editors just allways take FOR-EVER!!!

on Jul. 9 2010 at 12:56 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

This is kindof like what i felt when my BF broke up with me good work!! your stuff is UH-mazing!!

on Jun. 9 2010 at 1:55 pm
TanviKusum DIAMOND, Gurgaon, Other
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All men who have achieved great things have been great dreamers.
Orison Swett Marden

"The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say." - Anais Nin

we speak in hushed voices so as to not wake our memories

Your welcome. I really like your work. :) I am not such a good writer myself. My work is stuck with the editors. :)

on Jun. 9 2010 at 10:30 am

thanx so much! i really appriciate it=) nd i read ur other comment on "heartbreaing"

thanx  4 the tip. ill keep that in mind nxt time. ill chek out ur work nxt tim e i go on a comp cuz i gotta get off this one or teacher wll yell=)


on Jun. 8 2010 at 11:44 am
TanviKusum DIAMOND, Gurgaon, Other
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Favorite Quote:
All men who have achieved great things have been great dreamers.
Orison Swett Marden

"The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say." - Anais Nin

we speak in hushed voices so as to not wake our memories

I can relate to thas poem of yours! Beautifully written!


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