Heartbreaking

He broke my heart
Every piece, shattered
All i wanted was his love
Real,as he promised
Ture, as mine 4 him
But he walked away
Right in the middle of paradise
Every beat of my heart
Aches for his love
Keeping the flame aglow
I will wait by the light
Never losing hope
God will send him back to me





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Iloveme This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 11:46 am
Really nice. 1 suggestion,u can add I hope to the last line,will rhyme more! :)
 
bound4life4ever This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 11:12 am

haaha....thanx 4 the suggestion=)

ill keep that in mind nxt time

 
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