Heartbreaking

May 13, 2010
By bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
32 articles 0 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.


He broke my heart
Every piece, shattered
All i wanted was his love
Real,as he promised
Ture, as mine 4 him
But he walked away
Right in the middle of paradise
Every beat of my heart
Aches for his love
Keeping the flame aglow
I will wait by the light
Never losing hope
God will send him back to me


The author's comments:
this is just an acrostic poem based on a real life experience

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on Aug. 24 2010 at 11:12 am
bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
32 articles 0 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.

haaha....thanx 4 the suggestion=)

ill keep that in mind nxt time


on Jun. 8 2010 at 11:46 am
TanviKusum DIAMOND, Gurgaon, Other
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Favorite Quote:
All men who have achieved great things have been great dreamers.
Orison Swett Marden

"The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say." - Anais Nin

we speak in hushed voices so as to not wake our memories

Really nice. 1 suggestion,u can add I hope to the last line,will rhyme more! :)


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