letting go

May 12, 2010
You won't see my pain,
if all you see's my smile,
convinced all is fine
once you here me laugh awhile

But you saw through it all,
you saw all my tears,
you heard all my painfull crys,
and whittnessed all my fears,

so i put up all the masks,
let go of the fecade,
took off the disquise
and i lifted it to god





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bound4life4ever This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 8:24 am
hey... i commented on ur wor lke i sad i would. thanx 4 commented on mine..i look at ur info nd i c ur fav. hero is GOD!!! so... r u a christian?
 
kick_bootie_ninja replied...
Jun. 20, 2010 at 10:51 am
yes, i am, very christian... are you?
 
kick_bootie_ninja replied...
Jun. 20, 2010 at 10:52 am
yes, i am, very strongly, are you?
 
kick_bootie_ninja said...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 1:10 pm
i honestly think i couldve done MUCH better on this, but i just cant think sometimes, which tends to be a problem ;) lol well, please comment
 
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