myself

May 20, 2010
standing in the crowded place
everyone seems so black and white
they look at me with aw
i think they notice that i am myself
but im the only one that seems to have color in me
why do they laugh and point?
in just representing my individuality





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AngelLOLZ said...
May 24, 2010 at 4:18 pm
i like this poem alot.
 
TNT25 said...
May 24, 2010 at 3:54 pm
good. just wish it was longer. other than that, bravo. i'd love to get your opinion on one of mine.
 
BABE. said...
May 24, 2010 at 12:35 pm
i wish babe could read this=[
 
anthony s said...
May 24, 2010 at 12:26 pm
i don't really agree but your a good writer
 
Iamnotinenglish31 said...
May 24, 2010 at 12:25 pm
This was very meaningful and good
 
Rulesofmyown said...
May 24, 2010 at 11:16 am
that's niceee, if u can see mine:) thanks
 
xobabygirlxo said...
May 24, 2010 at 8:02 am
I think even though its short it's still good and shows how you like to be individual and i can relate to it because i like to be to and dont let people get to you with what they say people can only hurt you they are only jelous because they cant be you
 
NerdyT17 said...
May 23, 2010 at 12:44 am

wow this was really great

 

 
Thrush said...
May 22, 2010 at 3:24 pm
thanks for noticing.
 
Eilatan This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 22, 2010 at 11:44 am

long skirts and bangle bracelets and black nail polish aren't so common at my school

i can connect

 
Thrush replied...
May 22, 2010 at 3:24 pm
SO TRUE. Gosh I hate it.
 
Anima A. said...
May 22, 2010 at 6:50 am
NICE INDIVIDUALITY IS WHAT MAKES EVER HUMAN BEING DIFFERENT AND UNIQUE. YOU GO!
 
Sumana2 said...
May 21, 2010 at 6:19 pm
Show your individuality no matter what. This was amazing, great job.
 
LizLockett13 said...
May 21, 2010 at 6:16 pm
This is really good!
 
Dominicangirl said...
May 21, 2010 at 5:37 pm

Wow i really liked this :)

check out my work?

 
TheSummoningFreak said...
May 21, 2010 at 4:03 pm
this is really good
 
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