The Way

April 18, 2010
By sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape


For so long I've hurt way too much
I've been fighting hard but I've lost my way
All it takes is that one little touch
And tears fill these eyes colored like blue jays

Just take my hand and hold it tight
Lean your head against mine
When our gazes meet my world fills with light
You're making me feel way too fine

If I could I'd stay like that forever
Just the two of us, breaking the laws
I feel so perfect whenever we're together
Looking like a slow dance set on pause

I know when you hold me in your arms
You're asking me not to leave
When your fingers stroke my face, the atmosphere warms
And I can really start to believe


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on Jul. 2 2010 at 10:38 pm
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape

i know! all my friends think i'm crazy for writing so darkly all the time but all my happy stuff kind of sucks  haha :)

on Jun. 21 2010 at 11:47 am
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape

thank youuu!

Jessip GOLD said...
on Jun. 20 2010 at 9:17 pm
Jessip GOLD, Minot, North Dakota
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Lovily peice, I agree with pinkypromise23 with that slow dance on pause being my favorite line

on Jun. 4 2010 at 2:07 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

exactly...like when i try to write happy stuff it doesnt sound good

on Jun. 3 2010 at 9:51 pm
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape

thank you!

on Jun. 3 2010 at 7:57 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
30 articles 0 photos 414 comments

Favorite Quote:
i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

i love the line 'looking like a slow dance set on pause'. wow

on May. 30 2010 at 6:20 pm
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape

thanks :) yeah i have a ton of sadness in my poetry and my life. not too much happiness but when im happy and i write it never turns out as well. whatever makes the ink flow though :)

on May. 30 2010 at 6:18 pm
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape

yes i love love and its definitely the focus of most of my poems. thank you!

wondering GOLD said...
on May. 27 2010 at 10:25 pm
wondering GOLD, Oak Bluffs, Massachusetts
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I like the hint of sadness that you have it makes your writing really good.

on May. 27 2010 at 1:20 pm
FreakShow818 PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
23 articles 15 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never Let The Fear OF Striking Out Keep You From Playing The Game."

The beauty of these poems are breathtaking. It makes people who don't have love want and need it!


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