aint i here?

April 13, 2010
By Ale_18 BRONZE, Monte Vista, Colorado
Ale_18 BRONZE, Monte Vista, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
A dying man needs to die, as a sleepy man needs to sleep, and there comes a time when it is wrong, as well as useless, to resist.

am i not here? whats wrong?
people am here! am standing next 2 u cant u see me? am screaming towards the sky with all i have.
please dont you see me? am i
so insignificant? that you dont see me? please i beg see me.its not a cry for help.. i just thought u were my friend.
aint i here??

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on May. 7 2010 at 10:40 am
Literalist17 SILVER, Monte Vista, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Tact is, of course, only for those who lack the wit to possess sarcasm"

whoa..... just whoa That was powerful. it was a strong message, might I suggest changing your line grouping and stanzas.. but overall, just an awesome but sad poem :):


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