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am i not here? whats wrong?
people am here! am standing next 2 u cant u see me? am screaming towards the sky with all i have.
please dont you see me? am i
so insignificant? that you dont see me? please i beg see me.its not a cry for help.. i just thought u were my friend.
aint i here??



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Literalist17 said...
May 7, 2010 at 10:40 am
whoa..... just whoa That was powerful. it was a strong message, might I suggest changing your line grouping and stanzas.. but overall, just an awesome but sad poem :):
 
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