My Valentine

March 24, 2010
By bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”


You say I'm too good for you...
But I know that’s not true...
Cuz for some reason when I'm with you...
I feel happy and not blue...
Just cuddling on the couch or going out...
Makes me forget about all of my doubts...
I feel a great bond between us, which is true...
And I can tell that you feel it too...
So don’t hide from me, babe don’t be scared...
I believe theres a reason we have been paired...
I know you’ve been hurt, and I have been too...
But for a new great relationship, baby it takes two...
I can see you lost faith, I can see you’re upset...
But one thing I can promise you, I'm not one you’ll regret...
I know your broken relationship was a mistake from the start...
So let me in, I'll fix your broken heart...
I’m not gunna give you that same heartache...
I’ll protect your heart to make sure it wont break...
I’m not gunna play with your feelings like she did...
I’ll make you feel carefree, like when you were a kid...
Let me show you that at least there's one woman underneath the sky...
Who isn't everything you’re afraid of, who makes you feel you can fly...
And prove to me that all these girls are mistaking...
Show me that you’ll prevent my heart from breaking...
Let me see you’re not one of the same...
Be the player who quit the game...
I know its a risk we both have to take...
But I don’t think that these feelings are fake...
If you feel this way, if you agree...
Then let me in your heart, take a chance on me...
I know that you’re nervous, and hunny I am too...
But if you’ll take a chance on me, I'll take a chance on you...


The author's comments:
This piece is a little gift I wrote for my boyfriend for Valentine's Day

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on Oct. 15 2010 at 1:28 am
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Thanks I try =)

on Oct. 15 2010 at 1:28 am
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Thank you =D

on Oct. 15 2010 at 12:48 am
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Thank you! I definitely will =D

on Sep. 6 2010 at 5:39 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

i really love this ... check out my stuff? 

on May. 27 2010 at 6:53 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed my work and you will find love someday ;)

on May. 26 2010 at 11:52 pm
Acalleq PLATINUM, Togiak, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
you never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have

ur voice is one in a million! i usually don't go for love poems, maybe cuz i never been in love, but this made me long to be. keep writing poet!!

on May. 14 2010 at 6:39 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

merci bien captain. may you please telle which ones stand out the most to you.-im working on my titles. thas another key...

on May. 14 2010 at 6:28 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Thank you....i read a lot of yours too, havent made it through all of them yet cuz u have so many but all the ones i did get to were amazing as well! =)

on May. 14 2010 at 6:08 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

youre really good at the love story thing. this is really good-and i dont even believe in positive attitudes. very nice captain. i enjoy reading your stuff.

on Apr. 15 2010 at 9:26 pm
Wow!!! amazing!! =]

on Apr. 14 2010 at 10:21 am
davina kahen BRONZE, Greenvale, New York
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i love this. its really cute and your a great writer(:

on Apr. 12 2010 at 10:50 am
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Thank you =D

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on Apr. 12 2010 at 10:49 am
BlackPersona, Your Grandma, Minnesota
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Very romantic and lovely. It looks like someone is truly in love. ;D It sounds like an awesome chemistry!


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