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You say I'm too good for you...
But I know that’s not true...
Cuz for some reason when I'm with you...
I feel happy and not blue...
Just cuddling on the couch or going out...
Makes me forget about all of my doubts...
I feel a great bond between us, which is true...
And I can tell that you feel it too...
So don’t hide from me, babe don’t be scared...
I believe theres a reason we have been paired...
I know you’ve been hurt, and I have been too...
But for a new great relationship, baby it takes two...
I can see you lost faith, I can see you’re upset...
But one thing I can promise you, I'm not one you’ll regret...
I know your broken relationship was a mistake from the start...
So let me in, I'll fix your broken heart...
I’m not gunna give you that same heartache...
I’ll protect your heart to make sure it wont break...
I’m not gunna play with your feelings like she did...
I’ll make you feel carefree, like when you were a kid...
Let me show you that at least there's one woman underneath the sky...
Who isn't everything you’re afraid of, who makes you feel you can fly...
And prove to me that all these girls are mistaking...
Show me that you’ll prevent my heart from breaking...
Let me see you’re not one of the same...
Be the player who quit the game...
I know its a risk we both have to take...
But I don’t think that these feelings are fake...
If you feel this way, if you agree...
Then let me in your heart, take a chance on me...
I know that you’re nervous, and hunny I am too...
But if you’ll take a chance on me, I'll take a chance on you...



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olican16 said...
Sept. 6, 2010 at 5:39 pm
i really love this ... check out my stuff? 
 
bkcrider92 replied...
Oct. 15, 2010 at 12:48 am
Thank you! I definitely will =D
 
roseann This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 26, 2010 at 11:52 pm
ur voice is one in a million! i usually don't go for love poems, maybe cuz i never been in love, but this made me long to be. keep writing poet!!
 
bkcrider92 replied...
May 27, 2010 at 6:53 pm
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed my work and you will find love someday ;)
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 14, 2010 at 6:08 pm
youre really good at the love story thing. this is really good-and i dont even believe in positive attitudes. very nice captain. i enjoy reading your stuff.
 
bkcrider92 replied...
May 14, 2010 at 6:28 pm
Thank you....i read a lot of yours too, havent made it through all of them yet cuz u have so many but all the ones i did get to were amazing as well! =)
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 14, 2010 at 6:39 pm
merci bien captain. may you please telle which ones stand out the most to you.-im working on my titles. thas another key...
 
redroses41893 said...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 9:26 pm
Wow!!! amazing!! =]
 
bkcrider92 replied...
Oct. 15, 2010 at 1:28 am
Thank you =D
 
Davina K. said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 10:21 am
i love this. its really cute and your a great writer(:
 
bkcrider92 replied...
Oct. 15, 2010 at 1:28 am
Thanks I try =)
 
BlackPersona said...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 10:49 am
Very romantic and lovely. It looks like someone is truly in love. ;D It sounds like an awesome chemistry!
 
bkcrider92 replied...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 10:50 am
Thank you =D
 
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