The Bat

March 23, 2010
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The bat got some stats,

it hit the ball hard to

get those good stats.

The bat got a run

to get one stat,

it hit the ball

forty feet to

to get one


bat was


but oh!

It missed

and that was

the story of the

big fat scoring bat

that missed the ball.

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DerekA. said...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 8:10 pm
DerekA. said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 11:59 pm
they were all scrunched together when i typed it and it kinda looked like a baseball bat
BigDCo3 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 11:51 am
I like the way you spaced the words.
DerekA. replied...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 11:58 pm

i didnt mean 2 space them like that it was supposed 2 be a concrete poem and i guess the editors didnt think that i wanted it to be a concrete


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