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The bat got some stats,





it hit the ball hard to





get those good stats.






The bat got a run






to get one stat,






it hit the ball






forty feet to






to get one







score.The







bat was







swung







but oh!







It missed






and that was






the story of the






big fat scoring bat





that missed the ball.



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DerekA. said...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 8:10 pm
RATE AND COMMENT PLEASE
 
DerekA. said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 11:59 pm
they were all scrunched together when i typed it and it kinda looked like a baseball bat
 
BigDCo3 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 11:51 am
I like the way you spaced the words.
 
DerekA. replied...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 11:58 pm

i didnt mean 2 space them like that it was supposed 2 be a concrete poem and i guess the editors didnt think that i wanted it to be a concrete

 

 
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