my heart's desire

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My hearts desire
Like liquid fire
On paper you stay
To my dismay

A picture drew true
A sign of you
Awake! I call
But my heart does fall

You stay in place
Not arising from your hidden case
But worry not I ask
Ill bring you back from the past

Your word I call
As the mountain does fall
Destruction you shall bring
Upon all things

Alas, you can not stay
So I must call you away
Till in a time of great need
When once again your help I’ll plead





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SMWells said...
Nov. 18, 2010 at 7:54 am
You made only one mistake as far as I can tell. I like the poem. But, like liquid fire? It startles the reader,  but it dosen't realy fit in.Still, I can hardly criticise this.senes I wrote a with the same thought patern but expresed it diferently and were you had the line that I don't like. I had a mising word.
 
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