All I Need is Your Eyes

March 16, 2010
By SpencerR SILVER, Bonney Lake, Washington
SpencerR SILVER, Bonney Lake, Washington
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I don’t want what’s in your pants
I don’t need to see you dance

I don’t need the touch of your lips
I don’t need to see the swing of your hips

I don’t want you to ever feel pain
I don’t want you to see me go insane

I don’t need to know your past
I don’t need to see who else has been cast

It probably won’t be a huge surprise
But all I need is your eyes


The author's comments:
This is the first poem that I've ever published that isn't totally emo and dark. It expresses how I feel in a way that isn't depressing to read.

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amybug said...
on Aug. 26 2010 at 5:58 pm
amybug, Penrose, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Always remeber there was nothing worth sharing like the love that let us share our name." -The Avett Brothers

Wow, that is so sweet. I love it!

on Apr. 25 2010 at 6:58 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

oh my gosh!! i love this :) this is really well written, and it has great rhythm and a really nice flow. it's really sweet too :) haha. great job. it's really awesome!


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