Blue Bottles

March 9, 2010
By AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani


Blue bottles,two blue bottles
I'm all bottled up
Blue heart, two blue hearts
I'm all in love
Blue sky, yours and mine
Two blue skies and
Flying is a white dove
Blue water, take a swim
One takes a swim when
The other can't
Blue day, cause I'm sad
Blue bottles in my hand
I'm all bottled up
Blue heart, I'm all in love
Blue sky, up above
Yours and mine my love
Blue bottles, two blue bottles
Sit in my room on the floor and
They shimmer and what more
Do I want than to not be alone
Blue bottles, two blue bottles
Just a garage sale find and
I did'nt mind
Now I look at them so truelly blue
Just like my heart is
Blue bottles, and I'm all bottled up

Blue water, I should take a swim
Blue heart, burning hot
At the thought of him
Blue water should cool me off
Once again, again
Blue water so cold and crisp
Blue sky makes up for blue wind so brisk

Blue bottles
Blue hearts
Blue life
Blue smarts
Blue sky
Blue wondering why
Blue ocean
Blue butterfly
Blue, blue
Everything is blue my darling
Life is so blue without you

I'm reaching for warmth
All I have is this blue sweater
Blue thoughts in my head
I long for when
You'll make this blueness better


The author's comments:
So I was feeling really blue when I wrote this!Hope it dos'nt make anybody too sad;)

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on May. 13 2010 at 4:46 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

thanks, me too!:)

kksme SILVER said...
on May. 12 2010 at 9:12 pm
kksme SILVER, Greenvale, New York
9 articles 0 photos 11 comments
Really good. I like how blue can be happiness and sadness in a way. 

on May. 10 2010 at 7:57 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

I kinda know what you mean....which parts are you talking about?:)

on May. 10 2010 at 7:54 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

Thanks so much!I love getting feedback for my work:)I think those are my favorite parts too! I can't wait to read some of your stuff!!!!

on May. 10 2010 at 7:50 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

Okay I'd love to hear your input, if there's anything I can do to make it better, I want to try to do it!:)

chels19 BRONZE said...
on May. 10 2010 at 7:39 pm
chels19 BRONZE, Clarkston, Michigan
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"So it goes."
"Everything was beautiful, and nothing hurt."
"I'm guilty. but I'm not to blame."
"Talent is actually the self-discovery and acknowledgment that you possess the interest and motivation needed to become exceptional in a specific area."

i love this! these are my two favorite parts:


Blue heart, burning hot
At the thought of him
Blue water should cool me off
Once again, again
Blue water so cold and crisp
Blue sky makes up for blue wind so brisk


I'm reaching for warmth
All I have is this blue sweater
Blue thoughts in my head
I long for when
You'll make this blueness better

 

and i love the "I'm all bottled up"


on May. 6 2010 at 8:12 am
Ebony_Rose PLATINUM, Hot Springs, Arkansas
21 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The simplest way that i can understand therapy is that we're born a certain
way, we're taught to be something different, and we spend our whole lives
trying to unravel it and ultimately align ourselves with who we really are." ~Billy Corgan

I like this one too... But there was something there that was just a bit off... Idk... I'll read it again when I get home and try to figure it out... XD

on May. 4 2010 at 9:02 am
MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
37 articles 4 photos 196 comments

Hmm...I'd say the one thing that could be made better is perhaps taking away some of the lines, lines that maybe mean less to you than others, because towards the middle it starts to feel like you 'lost your way'. I mean, not lost your way forgot about what your writing, but lost your way in that it felt like too much on one topic, you know?

 

Sorry, I'm not all that good at constructive criticism... 


on May. 2 2010 at 1:55 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

typo* sorry about that:)

on May. 2 2010 at 1:55 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

Thanks! I'm to am pretty attached to this poem, and my blue bottles!:)haha I'm glad you like it though...... Is there anything you think I could make better, or that you did'nt like?

on May. 2 2010 at 1:28 am
MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
37 articles 4 photos 196 comments
I like this one too! Although it didn't make me sad, per se...more thoughtful. I think it's because of the emotional associations I have for blue and bottles...

on Apr. 13 2010 at 1:12 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

Thank you so much I'm glad you like it!I was pretty sad when I wrote it.I really like your stuff too:)

Lonleydandy said...
on Apr. 10 2010 at 3:37 pm
Aw, sorry about whatever happened to you!!! I did like the poem though! I also like the one called "Anima" as well. :D




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