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Him

Him

At lunch I sit and see the way you look at him,
With those eyes that say I need you because I love you,
Yet he sits with her and smiles,
He holds her hand and laughs,
At your pain it seems is the price,
No one get's it, why your sad,
Why you put down your head,
Let me help you pick it up,
Stand up tall and not afraid and just wait,
He'll come back if it's meant to be,
Yet he'll come back if it's meant to be.
"This will certify that the above work is completely original."
Amanda Weibley




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ScreenName777 said...
Apr. 2 at 1:33 pm:
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
 
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windswiftThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 6:12 pm:
i liked this poem, it lets the emotions of losing someone, then seeing them with someone else show brillaintly.  this work is a great piece, keep up the good work and one day you may well become famous.  nathan
 
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distant_dreamer said...
Jul. 28, 2009 at 4:22 pm:
I love it all!!! Great Job! Keep on writing, you probally will be famous one day! <3
 
twilightprincess replied...
Nov. 8, 2009 at 4:09 pm :
Thank you soo much :)
 
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