Looking into the past

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I look to the reflection glass
Looking to see
A girl colored like brass
Looking back at me
By the look in her eyes
I could tell she was hurt
By the little sighs
Her heart had been burnt
As the tears fall
I feel then too
Her body becomes all
Black and blue
A scarlet river
Running from her arm
Giving me a shiver
To see this harm
This is my past
This girl I see
Nothing was meant to last
Although we were meant to be
I look away
Away from the brass girl
This is a new day
New time, new world





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INnaturegirl said...
Mar. 17, 2010 at 7:22 am
i love this awesome job love :D !!!!!!
~i really like the lines "nothing was meant to last although we were meant to be"
 
EmoAnon replied...
Mar. 26, 2010 at 9:58 am
Thank you for the comments! I am really glad you like my poem, and hope to hear more people giving me feedback soon.
 
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