November 14th

February 10, 2010
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One whole year has gone and passed,
making our memories stretch and last,
it's been fun, it's been true,
sometimes far away, but mostly next to you.

We've been to movies, we've been to malls,
staying up late and still making calls,
swapping jackets, playing cards,
sometimes beating you was a little bit hard.

Lying in the grass, watching the stars,
trying to count them, listening to cars,
asking bout soulmates made my heart flutter, i don't want to be with just any other.

before you found me i was heading downhill,
watching the tears fall onto the sill,
counting the minutes, seeming like hours,
just to pass time, drawing wird flowers.

You entered my world and suddenly it's changed,
releasing the heart doomed to be caged,
out went the rain and in came the sun,
all my sad days were finally done.

God the year just flew right by,
not even stopping to say goodbye,
me and you? we'll last forever,
and it all started the fourteenth of november.





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elfiewrites said...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 8:02 pm
This is so sweet. I especially love how you wrote it from the heart! Keep on writing! If you get the chance, may you please comment on my work, as well? Much appreciated.
 
iloveyou:) said...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 9:50 am
i love it.
my birthday is on the same day! haha.
 
PoetLaureate07 said...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 9:34 am
This is really pretty!! you wrote it from the heart, andthats all that matters!!!!!
 
swimstar28 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 8:44 pm
this is SO good! I absolutely love it, and I can relate to every single word! I can tell you wrote it from the heart, and that is what writing is ALL about! :)
 
Emokittiycut This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 24, 2010 at 2:24 pm
awww thanks star. i love getting feed back. :)
 
lalaj94 said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 3:53 pm
i love this! its so real and believable!
 
Emokittiycut This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 3:56 pm
thank you alot! he really meant the world to me.
 
not.oka.anymore replied...
Feb. 24, 2010 at 8:41 pm
Wow, This was really good. When my boyfriend and i broke up, i was so lost. We were like this, but i mean, what can you do but more on? Its not your fault. Ha. but anyway good job girl. (:
 
Emokittiycut This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 2:50 pm
thx!! srry to hear bout yur ex. im glad you cud relate. thats wat i aim for. i try to put a peice of meh in ever poem i write so that it all comes from my heart.
 
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