January 18, 2010
By Tonboko BRONZE, N/A, North Carolina
Tonboko BRONZE, N/A, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I my be crazy now, but I'm saving up to be excentric."

Head held high

I feel no shame

Off of my beauty

Their eyes try to pry

The flowers cry

For they don’t compare

That is what is seen

With the naked-eye

Eyes cast down

I feel a brat

On my painted face

Their eyes frown

The spirits laugh

For they see beyond the sparkling gown

That is what is seen

With the opened eye.

The author's comments:
This a while back as a part of a series of personal challenges to make angsty poetry
Ino is a girl from a show that I like who seems to not have that many problems with life, so I made this poem and played on her title, The Flower of Konoha.

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on Feb. 12 2010 at 8:18 pm
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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i like it...


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