Things I love about you

January 13, 2010
By Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
21 articles 0 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain.
-Vivian Greene


I love it when you look at me
with those eyes of innocense,
I love it when you hold me
and I can smell your incense.
Even in my darkest hour
you can make me smile,
When i've been put down in defeat,
I see you and can walk a mile.
Your the founder of my heart,
The yin to my yang,
The sweetest strawberry,
and even the some to my thing.
Oh how I love your smile,
It's like the rising son,
and every second with you,
it's just like pure fun.
How I love you,
I will never know.
But until never comes,
I'll never let you go.


The author's comments:
i was inspired to write this poem for my first and only true love.

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on Feb. 28 2010 at 8:21 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

ha definetly. u really did an awesome job. so creative & deep. i hope he reads it ;))

on Feb. 26 2010 at 2:54 pm
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
21 articles 0 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain.
-Vivian Greene

aww thx. i wrote this for my ex cause he kept goin on and on bout me nvr sayin things about wat i loved him for. i always replied to him that i loved all of him. so, to help explain better i wrote it in a poem. i usually get my point accross n these things. lol.

on Feb. 25 2010 at 9:36 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

wOw. blew my mind lol. luvv it. my favorite is the last line. plz keep writing

on Feb. 25 2010 at 6:53 pm
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
21 articles 0 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain.
-Vivian Greene

thank you. it really means alot to me that you took the time to comment.

on Feb. 25 2010 at 6:52 pm
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
21 articles 0 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain.
-Vivian Greene

thx! im glad you cud relate. all my poems are from my heart.

on Feb. 25 2010 at 5:17 pm
MeXiCaNsHoRtY BRONZE, East Chicago, Indiana
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WoW..i love this one it relates alot to me. that;s how i feel right now with someone..keep up your poems!!!

on Feb. 25 2010 at 9:31 am
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

This one is truly AMAZING!!! I like potry like this, and i can truly relate!!!


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