Things I love about you

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I love it when you look at me
with those eyes of innocense,
I love it when you hold me
and I can smell your incense.
Even in my darkest hour
you can make me smile,
When i've been put down in defeat,
I see you and can walk a mile.
Your the founder of my heart,
The yin to my yang,
The sweetest strawberry,
and even the some to my thing.
Oh how I love your smile,
It's like the rising son,
and every second with you,
it's just like pure fun.
How I love you,
I will never know.
But until never comes,
I'll never let you go.





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bamboom212 said...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 9:36 pm
wOw. blew my mind lol. luvv it. my favorite is the last line. plz keep writing
 
Emokittiycut This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 2:54 pm
aww thx. i wrote this for my ex cause he kept goin on and on bout me nvr sayin things about wat i loved him for. i always replied to him that i loved all of him. so, to help explain better i wrote it in a poem. i usually get my point accross n these things. lol.
 
bamboom212 replied...
Feb. 28, 2010 at 8:21 pm
ha definetly. u really did an awesome job. so creative & deep. i hope he reads it ;))
 
MeXiCaNsHoRtY said...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 5:17 pm
WoW..i love this one it relates alot to me. that;s how i feel right now with someone..keep up your poems!!!
 
Emokittiycut This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 6:52 pm
thx! im glad you cud relate. all my poems are from my heart.
 
PoetLaureate07 said...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 9:31 am
This one is truly AMAZING!!! I like potry like this, and i can truly relate!!!
 
Emokittiycut This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 6:53 pm
thank you. it really means alot to me that you took the time to comment.
 
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