Why can't I fly?

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It's not fair for birds
to have wings,
Leaving me on the ground
like a helpless being.

If i had one wish
i would wish to fly,
Above everyone in the world
up in the sky.

But sadley I know
it will never come true,
While I watch and see
everyone has flew.





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Laina said...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 7:09 pm
I really like it! you have alot of talent! keep it up :P
 
Pillow said...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 11:16 pm
I love your poem. It's a purfect mix of simplicity and deeper meaning.
 
enchanted4yu said...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 7:16 pm
I like this a lot the last line is very powerful
 
Emokittiycut This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 7:34 pm
thank you. i actually came up with the ending by mistake but im sooo glad i did. it really gives voice to the poem. i love hearin feedback.thx
 
enchanted4yu replied...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 12:10 am
great mistake! yourwelcome! check out some of my work if u can thankss
 
Emokittiycut This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 3:03 pm
lol. will do!! actually once im done with my email, but i will after that.
 
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