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Tones of admiration
Eyes of adoration
Words of animation
Look of aspiration

Hours of education
Plenty of elevation
Bundles of expectation
Surplus of emulation

Surge of desperation
Rush of devastation
Lack of domination
Loss of dedication





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AsIAm This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 23, 2010 at 8:32 am

The good:  I really like this!  It was somehow deep without being heavy, which was nice.  I love the way you grouped the words. Good job!

The bad: Looks good to me!

The random: Sorry it has taken me so long to get to your stuff...

 
MayaElyashiv This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 23, 2010 at 9:56 am

It didn't take you that long, considering how many pieces you've had to go through. I'm still amazed you had the energy for it.

Thank you so much!

 
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